If I had a TiVo for my mind,
you’d probably press “pause”
and “rewind,” and watch all the words
tripping over my tongue at a
more convenient time.
If my life were a video game,
you would likely say it was
lame, and tell me to sell it on eBay
while you shot at “Mother Brain.”
But what do I care if you dote
or won’t, and who cares if you
don’t like my show, cause
if we were ever to co-star,
you’d probably hog the remote.
THE SUNSHINE AWARD FOR YOU ON MY BLOG….CONGRATS!
Thank you Doraz for the ray of sunshine!
Please stop by at your leisure and view my post, Kreativity Strikes. It can be found on my Unexpected Gifts tab. You are not required to accept the award but I would like you to know that I appreciate what you do and have nominated you for the recognition. Keep up the kreative posts!
I promise you….I will not hog the remote! I rarely watch TV! Now movies, another story! 🙂
Your poem made me smile. I like how it is light hearted and witty!
Thank you, and thank you for visiting! Your gravatar is making me smile!
really cool..
i am loving your theme..
Very cute !!
Tivo for the mind wow you’re creative…… This was a nice read, original and great
Thank you! It’s good to hear from you!!
Hi, I like the new blog theme. I also like the idea of comparing life to a video game and the thought of having TiVo for the mind.
Thank you and thank you. My life would be a cross between Tetris and Dance Dance Revolution!! How about yours???
I caught the displaced rhyme scheme but I cannot discover the form. Is it a form or did you create it? Anyway, I enjoyed the humor, the sarcasm, and the frustration in your words. Good luck!!
I’m not really sure what form is, so I must have created it. Not really a true story either, but thanks just the same!
It’s your show girl! May the cast be loveable and comedy ensue!