Standing on such
s a y ground.
Head is spinning
strong as a rock,
by an aftershock.
It’s nice to see you’re still writing poetry. . . well maybe . . . just noticed the date of this post.
Dean! It’s good to see you!! I try to post when the mood strikes me. I’d like to post more often. It ebbs and flows. Welcome back!?
I, too, like the layout of the poem, especially the “s h a k y” part. 🙂
Thank you! It’s good to see you!!
Cute poem. Love how the words imitate an earthquake!
Wow ! Hope everyone is safe and not too shaken !
Yeah and Yowza! That was a trip, wasn’t it!!! Great telling of how it felt! Wonderful. Cheers and Namaste. 🙂
We have to remember our friends in Vegas when we have a quake! lol 🙂 Nice one!
Yeah, that was a big ‘un. I wish I’d had my camera to record the water sloshing around in my uncle’s pool.
i hope all is well
what really catches my mind when reading this is the number of casualties in comparison to the that in the south of america few month ago…
beautiful- thank you for dropping by az and your wonderful comments- just wish i have more time to drop by others..
You have the ability to take us on a journey with you,how wow
Wow, love the visual and the content. Some family friends were in Chile during the recent quake and it was scary just to hear them retell the experience.
It was crazy, I felt today’s California quake all the way in Vegas!
I really like your poem,
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