Opening the shades
his smile eclipses the sun
snow dusts the dessert
Credit: twitpic.com @bigredrobot
fascinating… imagery is stunning. thanks for sharing.
Thank you TC! Thanks for dropping by!
Oooooh, beautiful words for this photo! Loved it!
Thank you Rachel! And thank you for stopping by.
Great poem, but what a terrible pic – so sad (sic).
Awww shucks, I’m sorry you found the pic sad. I quite enjoyed the site of Palm Trees covered in snow. It’s so uncommon! Thanks for visiting and thanks for your comment.
I love this. I never thought of a smile outshining the desert sun, but eclipsing it – wow – what an image. Snow in Vegas…amazing. The photo is stunning too. Three profund ideas joined in one make for one of the best haiku poems I’ve ever read. Nice work!!
I am eclipsed by your praise! Thank you, and thank you for visiting!!
Beautiful… absolutely ethereal!!
Thank you Olivia & Talon! Good to see you both. 🙂
It’s amazing how much can be conveyed in so few words…
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