What if the fence weren’t painted white
What if vows were broken
What if friendship didn’t exist
and our feelings went unspoken
What if we had never met
What if this postcard went unsent
beyond my window
poems, rhymes & words
The first line has an amazing effect on this poem for me – that white fence got me set up for a perfect world, and the poem followed through. Nice work!
How beautiful and lovely.
for each case, there is a consequence.
bittersweet and playful…
I agree that way too many times we let good things pass us by and this is a shame happy picnic and wonderful poem thanks
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/
Makes a point in a simple way. Nicely done, Aleza.
Jamie Dedes
This is really sweet and sad. I wish people still sent postcards.
amazing wonders.
love those questions and your drawbacks on relationship az.. tq for sharing.. my gooseberry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/16/helpless/
lovely imaginations,
Thanks for sharing.
So good that you sent it out into the world. Hey, also thanks for following my blog, I just got the notice. Cheers!
So many times we let good things pass us by. Very nicely done!
There is such beauty in simplicity! This is a prime example. Thank you for this lovely contribution to FWF! I’ve missed you!!!
Hope to see u back next week!
Big hugs!